I believe what you composed was very reasonable.
But, what about this? what if you added a little content?
I mean, I don't want to tell you how to run your blog, but what if you added
a post title to maybe grab a person's attention? I mean 天天搜索 | 西瓜导航
is a little plain. You should glance at Yahoo's front page and see how they write post headlines to grab people
to click. You might try adding a video or a picture or two to grab readers interested about what you've written. Just my opinion, it could bring
your blog a little bit more interesting.